Monday, October 15, 2007

A Game 3 Haiku

Daisuke not good Dice-K soils big time
GIDPs kill our bats
Down 2-1; must win



Pedantic poems
Do not flatter you, Anne C.
Stick to green cleaning

3 comments:

anne said...

good haiku except
"daisuke" has two syllables
on shirts anyways

anne said...

sick poetic burn
but i won't admit defeat
nor sub-par grammar

MRhé said...

Lack of init. caps
Irritates me even more
Than haiku pot-shots